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Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like, while others say that they should think more realistically about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Few individuals contend that
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 future professions according to their abilities.
On the other hand
, the opponents argue that
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 pragmatic approach must be followed. There are certain pros and cons of both strategies but I believe that the agians of
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 approach are far more than
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To begin
 with, the liberty to choose any career has many positives. Everyone has some special qualities which are determined by their genetic makeup
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 as some people have inborn latent of the music, while they may be not good athletes. If young ones adapt to the best suitable profession that matches their personalities, they would excel in that field.
For instance
, if a student who has an extraordinary God gifted talent for mathematics; opt math for his higher studies, his performance would be far better than his colleagues.
On the contrary
, a variety of professionals are required for smoothing
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 of society rather than only a few fields' personnel. The choice to select professions must be customized according to the needs of a community
that is
 why the number of seats for higher studies in universities should be limited for each field.
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 medical doctors should be determined by the government,
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only the required number of students are allowed to study medical sciences. In conclusion, I think that even though the freedom to choose any field for future endeavours can produce state-of-the-art professionals, it can lead to disproportion in the strength of various workers.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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