Some people think that it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness, rather than funding the treatment for people who are already ill. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Few individuals contend that the government fundings must be prioritized for the prevention and health promotion programs

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of squandering on palliative cares. There are certain pros and cons of

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strategy but these advocates believe that it is better to nip the evil from the bud. I think that prevention is better than cure.

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with, there are enormous positives to spend more on health education to promote a healthy lifestyle.

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development can significantly reduce the incidence of

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that would decrease the morbidity and mortality of individuals.

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, it will save a reasonable amount of money for

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and the government which is being spent on the treatment of health disorders.

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, if the authorities educate

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on how to minimize the spread of infectious

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by maintaining personal hygiene that would decline the mortality rate associated with those

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and the governments could close the specialized units in hospitals dedicated to the illnesses.

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,

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phenomenon can lead to devastating consequences by increasing the miseries of already suffering

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and foremost, when less amount of funds are available for the treatment of fatal

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, it enhances the fatality of illnesses.

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, it would increase disease-related complications and disabilities which is a catastrophe for the whole society.

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, if cardiac units do not have sufficient funds to treat heart attacks, more

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would die and surviving patients would develop heart failures. In conclusion, the investment in the modification of lifestyle has many benefits including decrease the prevalence of

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and save an abundant amount of revenue. While reciprocal few funds for the treatment of illness can increase the suffering of the community. I think spending more on preventive services would have more fruitful impacts on society overall in the near future.