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In many countries, traditions and customs are disappearing. What are the reasons? What should schools and parents do to keeping our traditions alive?

#countries #traditions #customs #schools #parents
The
traditions
 and
cultures
 are disappeared in many countries because individuals were forgotten their
traditions
.
Also
, most of the
schools
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school's
schools'
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 teachers and
parents
 are not told any past life stories or their experiences. Nowadays, the competition will be increased by between a people
day
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days
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 by day,
such
 as educations, jobs, and wages. So, they do not think about their past decades.
To begin
 with, most of the elder people who were spent their time on social media, and online purchase, were not guided
their
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by their
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 child or children’s
traditions
.
For example
, the researchers found, most of the older people have been spent,
at
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apply
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30% time on social media.
Moreover
,
the
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a
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 significant number of
parents
 were ordered home delivery foods because they are not prepared the food items in the house. As a
results
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result
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, most of the traditional food items were forgotten by the
parents
 and children life.
In addition
, the
parents
 were taught their children by introducing
traditions
 and
cultures
.
For instance
, the 30 minutes per day time will be allocated by their
parents
 and talk about their
cultures
 and
traditions
.
Similarly
, ancestors’
traditions
 and
cultures
 will be taught in the schools by the teachers.
For example
, teachers can teach at least 30 minutes
ancestor’s
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 stories. To
summaries
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, younger age groups should be leant a lot of things from their parent’s
cultures
 and
traditions
 in order to improve younger’s knowledge, to guide their cooking traditional food items, and to develop children’s lifestyles. The
traditions
 and customs are vitally important for people’s life.
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