Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved?

The following diagram shows the
process
of
bricks
production and
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the steps.We can see that
brick
is made using only one material, and that the manufacturing
process
consists of six steps. It requires seven steps until  the
last
step, delivery. At the
first
stage
in the production of
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clay
is dug up from the ground by a digger.
Next
,
this
clay
is placed onto a metal grid. And
then
clay
is break up into pieces by a metal grid after that, small pieces are reached to the roller. In the
next
stage
,
clay
is mixed with sand and water. And
this
mixture is changed to
brick
. Following
this
brick
can
then
be shaped by mould or using a wire cutter.
Next
, these
bricks
are heated in a drying oven to produce dry
bricks
. After the drying
stage
, the
bricks
through a heating
process
and
then
the freezing
stage
. They are heated in a kiln from 200c to 13000c respectively and follow by cooling
process
and let it keep in the cooling chamber about 48 to 72hours. At the fourth
stage
of
this
process
,
bricks
are packed and
finally
can be sent to their destination respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • greenhouse gases
  • atmospheric heating
  • global warming
  • extreme weather events
  • rising sea levels
  • ecosystem disruption
  • heatwaves
  • droughts
  • species extinction
  • economic implications
  • disaster relief
  • tipping points
  • renewable energy
  • energy efficiency
  • carbon sequestration
  • reforestation
  • afforestation
  • sustainable agriculture
  • methane
  • nitrous oxide
  • international agreements
  • Paris Agreement
  • emissions reduction
  • lifestyle changes
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