Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Andy, I am writing

this

letter to apologise in response to your letter yesterday. We recently came to

this

house

a week back and since

then

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was trying to meet you in person but due to several arrangements in

house

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the house

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could not get time. The doors and windows of my

house

are required repairs to change the wooden frame and double glazed.

Work

started

from

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the

last

monday

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and

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engaged 2 workers for these repairs from 9 am to 3 pm only to avoid noise in the evenings by the time you return home.

However

,due to some technical

issues

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the

work

timings got extended till 7 pm for the

lat

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two days I really want to apologise for the

continues

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noise as it is indeed to get the repairs done by

day

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after tomorrow due to the rain forecast and any delay in getting the windows fixed might cause

rain water

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enters into the

house

and damage the

house hold

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things. I will engage two more

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workmen

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work men

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from tomorrow to ensure

work

will be completed by

this

sunday

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and no

further

fixes are required.I really appreciate your patience and support. Yours Sincerely, Mark Yellow

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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