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The number of people suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people believe that alternative medicine can help. Do you agree that alternative medicines are effective?

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In recent times, the need to seek alternative medications is an issue all over the world. Nowadays, it is believed by some that modern lifestyle could cause serious
helth
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health
problems
, which could be
coured
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cured
 with alternative medicines,
such
 as
yoga
 could help release
stress
, different type of diets to cure
alergies
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allergies
, and
homeopathy
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homoeopathy
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 medicines, as to cure different
health
 issues.
Firstly
, many people suffering from
stress
, due to work,
health
, and family
problems
, which could be released by
yoga
.
For example
, if someone life is
stressfuly
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stressful
, they should practice
yoga
 in their free times, as
yoga
 may
helps
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 to find your balance again and release
stress
 level in your body.
Secondly
, there
are
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 a wide range of diets which could help people to fix their
helth
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health
problems
,
for example
, ower weight which could
resoulting
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resulting
 serious harth
problems
. If these people would follow a suitable diet for themselves, it may solve their
health
 issues.
Lastly
,
although
,
diabates
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diabetes
 is a
commond
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common
 problem in our society, it could be medicated with
homeopathy
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homoeopathy
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.
For instance
, there
are
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is
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 some patient who
tride
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tried
trade
 out
different
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a different
the different
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 type of tea mix and it helped them in order to reduce their blood sugar level, which prove
homeophaty
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homoeopathy
 may help for others as well. In conclusion, alternative
midications
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medications
medication
 could help out
peple
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people
,
such
 as
yoga
 could reduce
stress
 level, diets could help prevent
health
 issues, and
homeopathy
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homoeopathy
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 could provide a positive
resoult
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result
.
Furthermore
, it is in my opinion that
elternative
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alternative
 medicines could be a solution for many
health
problems
.
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