Many parents prefer to teach children themselves instead of teaching . Why is this reason ? Is it good or bad ?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
In many ,countries it is argued that if
parents
Use synonyms
teach to their
children
Use synonyms
, it would be more profitable.
This
Linking Words
idea is thought of as a demerit . In the following essay ,the reason for
this
Linking Words
opinion and seeming it as a negative point will be discussed . The power full reason for intending
parents
Use synonyms
to teach their
children
Use synonyms
instead
Linking Words
of teachers would be the fact that expenses in school have increased . ,
Apparently
Add a comma
,Apparently
show examples
modernization in schools has been attended by societies that parent have to pay more fee for their student
education
Use synonyms
.
For instance
Linking Words
, some new technological devices intelligent electronic books and notebook are used in the educational environment that needs to spend much money to purchase them.
Moreover
Linking Words
, it would be hard for mothers and fathers .
Therefore
Linking Words
,
parents
Use synonyms
can not send their
children
Use synonyms
to school unless they pay considerable money for their
Use synonyms
students
Change to a genitive case
student's
students'
show examples
education
Use synonyms
. So , they prefer
children
Use synonyms
are lessened by
parents
Use synonyms
. Preventing
students
Use synonyms
to have a more desirable
education
Use synonyms
would be the case of having a negative view about training to
children
Use synonyms
by their parent .
Furthermore
Linking Words
, teachers in teaching are more professional than mothers and fathers because they have many experiences in
variety
Add an article
a variety
show examples
of subjects and
have
Add the particle
tohave
show examples
relate certifications.
For example
Linking Words
,
parents
Use synonyms
will not be able to lesson mathematics to
students
Use synonyms
because it needs a teacher who knows and understands it completely.
Thus
Linking Words
, if
children
Use synonyms
are not taught by a helpful and proper trainer , they will not have development and improvement in their educations. In conclusion , despite the fact that if parent
teach
Change the verb form
teaches
show examples
the
students
Use synonyms
, it will be cheaper , it is not reasonable and beneficial for
children
Use synonyms
education
Use synonyms
quality . Because many of subjects can not be learned to
children
Use synonyms
as well as a professional teacher . The more teacher teaches student,the more desirable
education
Use synonyms
will be created.
Submitted by z.noori347 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: