You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found out that you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter •Say where you think you left the papers. •Explain why they are so important. •Tell the manager what you want him or her to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to let you know that yesterday I attended a meeting at your hotel. Before the meeting, I stayed in room number 1, there was a side table on the right side of the bed where I left my essential
documents
.
These documents
are my passport, driving license, and credit card which I need on an immediate basis as I am travelling to Dubai next Monday to host our company's annual event to which all telecom distributors are invited and I am going to present our new product location intelligence which enables service providers to invest in the potential areas around the world. I hope this
is going to be a great breakthrough for the telecom sector.
Would you kindly send these documents
to my office address 123 MAIN ROAD, ISLAMABAD, PAKISTAN at the earliest? I will personally receive these documents
and I will be there from 9 AM to 5 PM.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Behram KhanSubmitted by Haris Khan on
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Integrate synonyms and more advanced vocabulary to articulate your points for a higher level of sophistication.
Coherence and Cohesion
Clarify transitions between ideas within paragraphs for smoother flow and coherence.
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Ensure the closing of the letter reiterates your request or main point to reinforce the message to the reader.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite