It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects shouldn’t worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to architectures. Some
people
insist that land developers should pay more attention to
purposes
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of each building than its
appearance
. I strongly agree with
this
opinion because the
first
priority of buildings is to protect one’s life, and
people
do not
care
about
its
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appearance
.
To begin
with, the
first
reason why I believe architects should pay more
attentions
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to purposes is that building may endanger one’s life. Usually,
people
spend
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almost
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most
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of their time inside buildings
such
as schools, offices and houses. And severe accidents may happen
as a result
of
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building. Countries
such
as Japan especially
care
about
function
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of
building
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the building
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, since Japan has many earthquakes and the houses are required to be bear with the earthquakes.
In addition
to
this
, another reason why I supporting
this
idea is that
people
usually do not
care
about
appearance
. In general, the most important factor of
building
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is what can they do inside the building. Take a shopping mall,
for example
,
people
care
about what kind of stores are in the mall, and they do not
care
about how the building looks like. The only exception is architectures in traditional tourist destinations.
For instance
, convenience stores and
fast food
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chain stores in Kyoto, where is famous for the old Japanese landscape, are ordered to change their
color
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of logo marks and the exterior into quiet
colors
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including brown for the sake of maintaining the landscape. To conclude, I reiterate my complete agreement with
this
topic.
This
is because serving
purpose
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is important for protecting one’s life, and
people
hardly
care
about
appearance
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the appearance
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of buildings.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • functionality
  • prioritize
  • building design
  • meet the needs
  • occupants
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • landmarks
  • symbolize
  • balance
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