Traditional ideas from older people about the way to live and behave are not helpful to young people and their futures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many are of the belief that past traditions now hold little future value for young
people
. In my opinion, there are still important lessons young
people
can learn from their cultural heritage. Supporters of
this
contention argue that the changing
world
has made old ways of life irrelevant.
This
is especially the case as technology has hastened cultural and economic upheaval. In the past, an individual’s grandparents might be able to give worthwhile advice related to how to behave at work and manage their relationships.
This
is now less true than ever before because of the advent of social media apps, dating websites, remote working and the loss of traditional career paths. The growth of the internet has had a
further
globalising effect that erodes the uniqueness of cultures.
For example
, recent women’s empowerment movements have occurred simultaneously globally, often in conflict with the traditional
values
of individual nations.
Nonetheless
, tradition serves as an increasingly important guide in a
world
with few fixed
values
. As the
world
has become more secular, religious
values
have declined but cultural traditions remain intact. A standout example of
this
would be the strong familial ties in Asian nations
such
as Japan, Korea, China, and Vietnam. Children in these nations are expected to listen to the advice of their parents, maintain cultural traditions, and behave within certain ethical bounds. Without these customs to guide their behaviour, young
people
would be at the mercy of the
values
espoused in popular media.
However
, by following mores from the past, young
people
will have a foundation to judge their present and future actions. In conclusion, despite the decreasing relevance of tradition in the modern
world
, it still holds an important place as a basis for ethical behaviour. Young
people
must
therefore
temper their desire to reform with a sceptical reverence for the past.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traditional values
  • Adaptation
  • Innovation
  • Interpersonal relationships
  • Timeless values
  • Modern challenges
  • Competitive
  • Hard work
  • Perseverance
  • Compliance
  • Suppression of creativity
  • Individuality
  • Progressive thinking
  • Wisdom
  • Elders
  • Past mistakes
  • Foundation
  • Community
  • Technology
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