Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive enough funding from the government in order for the, to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree?

It is obvious that money is necessary

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human's

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life. Artist is

the

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one of occupations that gets low income.

Therefore

, some believe that

artists

should fund by the

government

in order to make an essential work.

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essay will explain why providing money to

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artists

is not a wastage of money. It cannot be denied the all people should receive

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welfare equally from the

government

but the

artists

are a group of people who record some events or situations of each country which can represent a culture.

For example

, a caveman painted a picture of human's innovation on a wall.

Consequently

, the public

precieve

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perceive

a growth of people as the piece of

art

revealed.

Moreover

,

art

can generate income to a nation of the

government

set some

art

galleries so that they may be great tourist attractions of the country as same as generating revenue in return while the painters can express their passion through works.

However

,

art

is never created without the creators. Even though

art

is not a vital part of

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sustainability of human existences, it is important for individuals and societies.

Art

is a foundation of the population accommodation. To building a house,

for instance

, architectures use an idea of shapes and

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to manage components.

Furthermore

, there are many jobs that require

art

such

as chef, designer and inventor so that of the

government

do not help the

artists

, some works might extinct from the world. In conclusion

although

,

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occupations except the artist are more beneficial to the earth,

art

is worth

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and conserve since it is a symbol of each nation and a crucial part of some jobs.