Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding for the he government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree?
The verb gets does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.
The plural verb perceive does not appear to agree with the singular subject the public. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
The noun phrase growth seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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