Some people believe that it is the government's responsibility to provide care and financial to support people after they retire. Others, however, think that individuals themselves saving money in their own care when they are old. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to the

government

expenditure for seniors. Some

people

insist that the responsibility of taking care of retired

people

owed by the

government

, while others opine that the

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responsibility

owned by citizens. In

this

essay, I am going to discuss both views and examine the reason why I believe citizens should prepare

money

after they retire.

To begin

with, there are two primary reasons why

people

support the former idea.

Firstly

,

people

aged over 65, in general, are unable to continue their job.

However

,

people

aged over 65 are still spry and able to continue to work. Despite their lives are continue after they retire jobs,

this

is decided by

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Japanese law. If the

government

forces the old generation to retire, they have better support in terms of

money

.

Furthermore

, the Japanese

government

reported that it takes around 200 million yen after

people

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occupations.

However

, it is almost impossible for the ordinary Japanese to prepare

this

huge amount of

money

.

On the other hand

, some

people

believe individuals should save

money

for the life after retirement. In fact, the ageing of

Japan

's population is advancing significantly, and it has become nearly impossible to manage the current social welfare system in

Japan

. Take a pension,

for example

, only two working generations support one retiree in 2020, while around 12 youngsters supported one senior in 1950.

In addition

to

this

, the medical fee for the senior generation in

Japan

has tripled for

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50 years.

Thus

, the

government

have better cut costs for retirees and they need to prepare the living expenses for the life after retirement. To conclude, I believe both sides of the arguments have merits.

However

, I assume that

people

should save

money

for old age.

This

is because the ageing society in

Japan

has

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, and social welfares

such

as pension are likely to disappear.