many people think that public libraries should only provide books and should not waste their money on expensive hi-tech media, such as software, DVD's or videos. Do you agree or disagree.

In the modern age, technology has been replacing everything
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for instance
some public centres provide not only booklet but
also
expensive hi-tech media.
However
, many populations are nostalgic as they still prefer novel
instead
of convenient ways like e-books or software and
also
believe that hi-tech media in public places are wasting money. From my perspective, I strongly agree with
this
trend.
First
of all, public book rooms are opened to all people and it is free of charges.
Therefore
, providing expensive hi-tech news in them will take many revenues from the country. If the society is keen on visiting the public
libraries
and explore the knowledge, it will be like investing to improve the standard of the community life.
However
, a few societies are interested to go public book centres as they can search everything on the Internet within a few minutes.
Secondly
, it is enough to provide books in a public book club for some people who still love to use the public
libraries
. I have no doubt that if the software or DVD's or videos will be provided, no one will play them as we all have at least one mobile phone. People will absolutely prefer to love reading books but not for hi-tech media.
For example
, my aunt sometimes uses public
libraries
to read books on the way of travel
although
she only uses her phone to find every update news. To conclude, we have many other programs to invest the country's revenue
instead
of providing hi-tech publishing in public
libraries
.
This
is indeed wasting money as a community will not be interested in them. No one will not put any effort to use the software in public
libraries
while they can find everything on their phone within seconds.
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