Some people say that punishment is the best way to teach children to behave well, while others disagree and point out that rewarding and praising them is better.Discuss both views and state your opinion.

The debate on the ideal way to discipline youngsters has led to polarized views.

Although

a number of individuals believe that they should be penalized for their wrong behaviour, others are of contrary opinion.In my opinion, I vehemently agree with the view that they should be disciplined for bad attitudes as

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will help to instil good attitude into them and

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make them change speedily On the one hand , a reasonable number of individuals believe that rewards and praises are more beneficial. They believe

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will motivate them to deviate from bad acts rather than when children are being punished. Moreso, they think youngster that

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rewarded perform better in a given task than those that are scolded .

For example

, A research that was carried out in a primary school in Lagos ,it was reported that 80% of juveniles that were appreciated were outstanding in their performances as opposed to those that were punished.

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I completely disagree with

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view, as it is not an effective method of discipline

On the other hand

, some people think and I agree that young ones should be admonished for wrong deeds .

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doing so,it will instil discipline into them .

In other words

, they will be able to differentiate between right and wrong behaviour and make them desist from negative deeds.

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, A recent report in

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stated that 70% of youngsters scolded for behaving wrongly always have a change of attitude so that they

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be reprimanded again .

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they will adopt good manners at a very fast speed other than rewarding them . From the aforementioned example, it is apparent that young children should be penalized for their incorrect ways in order to make them adopt good habits. In conclusion, some individuals believe that young ones should be disciplined for their bad manners while others feel they should rather be acknowledged .In my opinion, I totally agree with the view that they should be rebuked for their

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actions as

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will make them deviate from wrong ways and learn positive attitude quickly.