A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Rahul, Hi buddy, thanks for agreeing to take care of my pet

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I am out for a week. I will leave my house at 5 P.M

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Friday and will be back

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next Friday, here is my contact number: 888-888-8888. Please call me anytime. I'll be staying in Hotel Holiday Inn, Merivale so if you can't reach my number please call the hotel and they will be able to connect you with me.

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, my pet dog is quite huge in size so don't get scared when you see him. In terms of care, he needs food 2 times a day so please make sure to feed him 2 times with a bowl full of his dog food, I have kept it under the dining table.

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, please feel free to take him out for a walk.

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are no house duties for you, I'll take care of it before I leave. See you soon. Best Wishes, Tirth T

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coherence cohesion

To enhance coherence, try to use a variety of linking words to connect your sentences more smoothly.

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Consider giving more specific instructions for pet care, such as what times of day to feed the pet or any special dietary needs.

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You have provided clear contact details and instructions for pet care.

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Your letter has a polite tone, which is suitable for writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

Your structure is logical, using paragraphs effectively to separate different points.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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