Some people believe that the media, such as the press, TV and Internet should be more strictly controlled. Others feel that controls should be loosened to give people freer access to information. Discuss both views.
A part of the population believes that current
media
(press, television and internet) should be controlled very strictly while others disagree by stating that there should be more freedom in getting information.
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of all, is easy to understand the part of the population that wants more control. The Linking Words
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is controlled by large corporations that only want what is best for them, Use synonyms
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making the content potentially dangerous because of disinformation. Even though The Internet is not private it can be a place where you can find from a video on how to play the guitar to content explaining how to build a bomb. Linking Words
For example
, a terrorist attack can plan everything from information obtained from Linking Words
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However
, history has documented cases of countries that use Linking Words
media
control to influence the Use synonyms
people
. Any type of control over the information is dangerous, even promoting dictators and making Use synonyms
people
disappear without any consequence. In China the Use synonyms
media
access is very controlled, which have caused the Use synonyms
people
not to be aware of anything that happens around them, during the pandemic, Use synonyms
for example
, it was forbidden to write anything about it and Linking Words
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caused many Linking Words
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to die.
In conclusion, even though too much Use synonyms
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and internet liberties can have dangerous effects it can Use synonyms
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misinform and rob Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite