The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care systems in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem to introduce more physical educational lesson in school curriculum. to what extent do u agree or disagree?

Obesity causes many health issues that significantly affect the health care system, some believe that expanding physical education classes in school is the solution. Sadly,

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a problem of modern times, it is true that physical activity reduces the incidence of obesity,

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expanding the hours dedicated to these activities in school is not the answer. Unhealthy foods are the main cause of weight gain, in ,schools kids are feed with

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high in calories and fat , in ,addition snacks machines are all over schools and of course that nothing coming from one of those machines should be eaten every day. Another problem is the parents are not cooking healthy

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prefer to buy junk

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cause is easier and faster,

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type of

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is one of the leading causes of obesity worldwide.

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, adults and children are being bombarded in the media (television, social media, videogames etc) with

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being presented as healthy,

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it is far removed from

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, most of them are high in fats and calories not only that but they have

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dangerous levels of sugar or salt. Government should find a way to control the way these products are presented to the people, that means being honest about what are the components inside,

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, a lot of drinks are marketed as healthy but when we check the back of the bottle we found that over half of the components promote chronic diseases like diabetes. Clearly expanding the physical activity curriculum in schools would have positive effects on weight,

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by itself is not enough. Society should demand more healthy foods in school as well as parents need to stop buying junk

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every day while governments demand a more honest presentation of

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products on the media.