Some people believe Online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

In recent years,
advancement
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of technology leads to
development
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the development
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of various option
how
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for how
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children
can learn and
study
in schools.
However
, While some believe that
this
education should be done with printed
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textbooks
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text
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books
, I would
argee
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agree
argue
with those who argue that it should be done
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exclusively
with online materials.
Firstly
, student learning with physical
books
grasp the knowledge faster and with
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ease.
This
is because they have a book in hand
,
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so that it can generate interest in the topic and they can
study
with concentration.
For instance
, according to
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a survey
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done by oxford university in 2015, students studying with
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books
more likely to remember the things
then
who read it online. The argument goes that if
children
start learning with online
books
, there are higher chances that they may not remember the topics, due to the distraction by other notifications on electronic devices, which leads to poor academic performance.
However
, I believe that by giving them online
study
material, they can learn from anywhere, anytime without
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to wait to reach home and
study
physical
books
. The reason for
this
is that online material can be easily carried away in electronic devices like Cellphone, Ipad or Laptop in the form of work or PDF files.
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free choice to
children
to learn from anywhere,
this
leads to motivation and passion among them.
Conversely
, if schools make compulsory for
children
to
study
from printed
books
,
student
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the student
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will lack the urge to learn things, as they feel pressure to learn at a specific time
everyday
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,
this
will result into the depression. In conclusion,
although
it is
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importance that
children
learn without a distraction and faster with the physical
books
, I feel that with the advancement in technology so on the basis of
this
student should be given free choice to learn anytime
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want and from any place.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online reading materials
  • printed materials
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • technology
  • convenience
  • interactivity
  • accessibility
  • visual appeal
  • physical books
  • parental guidance
  • digital skills
  • screen time
  • learning experience
  • personal preference
  • comprehension
  • critical thinking
  • creativity
  • word recognition
  • grammar
  • vocabulary development
  • reading habits
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