Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
A particular lobby of intellectuals in society
are
of the point of view, that Change the verb form
is
libraries
are outdated and hence
, their place should be taken over by computers
. A conflicting section of society is completely against this
and are of the opinion that replacing libraries
with computers
will be a disasterous
step to take. I support the latterCorrect your spelling
disastrous
,
since I strongly feel that no other source of information can replace the Remove the comma
apply
age old
science of reading books.
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age-old
Firstly
, computers
have ushered in an era of digital knowledge. All the information which one needs on any topic is available at the click of a button. For example
, one can surf through the wikepedia
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Wikipedia
on
to understand every aspect of that subject with its Change preposition
apply
time-line
. Since, Correct your spelling
timeline
computers
provide the desired information in less time, space and infrastructure, they should be replace
reading-houses.
Change the verb form
be replaced
On the contrary
, reading books, visiting libraries
are the traditional ways of learning since times immemorial. There is no better way to relax than a good book in a comfortable environment. For example
, you cannot replace reading a book with surfing the internet just beore
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before
goint
to bed. Correct your spelling
going
Libraries
house thousands of books written on a wide range of subjects. One can walk through any section of the library and read through relevant
book. Reading enhances the ability to concentrate and stay focussed on Add an article
the relevant
a relevant
accumulation
of knowledge. The biggest drawback of Add an article
the accumulation
an accumulation
computers
is the distraction and temptation to surf other sites, play games, visit social networking sites. This
flip side of computers
certainly gives the libraries
an upper edge.
To conclude, I reckon that though technology
is important and desktops are cost and space effective resources, spending money on establishing and maintain Add an article
the technology
libraries
is certainly more satisfying andSubmitted by asharma708 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite