The best way to prevent people from smoking is to impose high taxes on tobacco products. In this way, people will be less likely to develop a long-term addiction to smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to smoking habits. Some

people

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insist that authorities should

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up

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on

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products to prevent smoking. I strongly agree with

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opinion because it is impossible to motivate human beings

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punishments, and there are more efficient solutions to prevent addiction to smoking.

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with, the first reason why I support

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is that punishments,

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as high

taxes

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are not the best way to motivate

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to change. It is evident from

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research that punishments do not encourage

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to change, but rewards do.

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, authorities have better tell how good events will happen when

smokers

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stop smoking. As a matter of fact, the number of

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has increased for several decades in Japan, despite the

tobacco

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tax has rose to around 60 per cent in 2020.

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another reason why for supporting

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is that there are far better ways to address

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.

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, electronic cigarettes, which are less harmful

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mankind and less addictive, should be introduced. In fact, 20 per cent of

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in Japan transfer to electric

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from ordinary

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, and they are satisfied with it.

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, heavy addicts have better go to see a doctor, since

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addiction is curable. Thanks to the development of medical studies,

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are able to quit

tobacco

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addiction with medical

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.

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is more effective and faster than imposing

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.

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, I reiterate my complete disagreement

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is because high

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are

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not limit

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's actions, and there are more efficient ways to address

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including

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electronic cigarettes.