Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to the behaviour of prisoners. Some people insist that

criminals

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should be sent to

prison

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,

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others opine there are other solutions

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as encouraging them to work. In

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essay, I am going to discuss both views and examine the reason why I believe lawbreakers must be in jail.

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with, there are two reasons why people claim that

criminals

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should be in jail.

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, the most important function of

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is to isolate lawbreakers from

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. In fact, some murderers, who are recognized as "serial

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", do not reglet and reconsider what they did, and they continue criminal

acts

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again and again.

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, wrongdoers need to be isolated from citizens to keep

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safe.

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to

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, psychologically,

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plays a role

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proxy punishment.

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, citizens learn the gravity of offences and try not to commit criminal

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, thanks to the existence of

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.

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, others believe that

criminals

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should be given a chance to expand their talents and

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for two reasons.

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, juvenile

criminals

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often have relatively low IQ

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, and they engage in

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acts

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since they are unable to tell right from wrong. Given

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situation, the youngsters deserve to be educated and reconsider. Another point is that there are

criminals

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who have special talents that can

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for

society

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.

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, a cracker, who invades a network illegally, can be a hacker who has deep knowledge about the Internet and

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.

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, I believe both sides of the

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have merits.

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, I opine that offenders should be sent to jail.

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keeps

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safe and

prevent

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possible criminal

acts

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.