In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.  To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The community

prefers

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to eat fast

food

instead

of healthy one is a controversial issue these days. Some people think that fast

food

is a reason why

majority

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the majority

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of people suffering from illness

therefore

they think that impose high

taxes

on that kind of

food

is a great solution. I propound that, I completely disagree with

this

statement. Viewpoints on

this

are mentioned in the following paragraphs. There are several reasons why

government

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should not impose high

taxes

on it. The

first

and major one reason is there

are

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number

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of peoples life depends on

this

business. If

taxes

impose on fast

food

so, it can be a major drawback on their

income

source.

For instance

, due to the higher

taxes

crowd avoid

to eat

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fast

food

and

therefore

the

income

of shopkeepers decrease.

Also

,

it

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impact

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on

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unemployment as well. Another point to consider is that it affects to wealth condition of the

government

.

As a result

of a

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survey, the

government

gets majority

taxes

from fast

food

organisations and if that

sales

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goes down so it directly shows

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on the

government

’s earning. If their

income

rate

of

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goes down so managing funds for other sectors like education and

medical

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can be very difficult. That can be a serious issue for the

government

. In conclusion, fast

food

is not good for health but it is

also

a source of

income

for many people and for the

government

as well so, to impose

this

type of rule is not worthy. I completely against that.