Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Ahmad,
I have come to know through your letter that you recently changed your
school
. But after a few days
you realized that you are not feeling comfortable in Add a comma
days,
this
institution.
Dear, I think it’s quite normal you shouldn’t be worried about it because it takes time to adjust to the new atmosphere. I know you are an intelligent person and have an attractive personality, so i
suggest some tips which may help you to adjust to Change the capitalization
I
school
.
First of all, you have to make new friends. Introducing yourself to your classmates exchanging notes and providing helping materials is the best way to develop friendships between class fellows. Secondly
, you should join the sports and art clubs at your school
. And take part in all the activities of this
club according to
your choice, I hope this
will boost your confidence and hidden skills.
Last
but not least you should be punctate and prepare assignments in
time. All the teachers of your Change preposition
on
school
are respectable to you so you behave respectfully and be humble to your teachers. I hope these tips help you adjust in
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to
the
Correct article usage
apply
school
.
Best regards
KunwarSubmitted by computersinn2007 on
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Task Achievement
To further enhance your score in task achievement, ensure that your suggestions are clear, specific, and directly address the concerns outlined in the prompt. Also, expanding on each idea with examples or further explanation can make your response more comprehensive and engaging.
Coherence and Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, focusing on more varied and complex transitions between paragraphs and ideas can enhance the flow of your letter. Additionally, being attentive to paragraph structure by clearly separating distinct ideas into separate paragraphs can improve clarity and organization.
