some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centres is for privately owned vehicles to be banned, others however think this is not a realistic solution

some experts agree that the right option in controlling
traffic
congestion in major cities is to disallow private cars while others assumed
this
opinion is unachievable. I disagree that private owned vehicle should be banned from
city
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the city
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centre's
hence
traffic
light
should be set up in busy areas and
road
network mainly for private vehicle needs to be constructed. on the one hand,
traffic
lights should be placed in strategic places on major roads in order to regulate the influx of both private and public cars.
Also
,drivers and commuters
needs
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to educated on the colours of each
traffic
light
.They should be aware that different colours symbolize different meanings like red colour is for
stop
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a stop
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while yellow means ready.
For instance
,
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Osun
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osun
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the osun
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state government averted
traffic
in a popular location in Oshogbo which is the capital of the state by putting
traffic
light
in strategic places.
similarly
,
construction
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of roads
which
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that
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allows free movement of vehicles is one of the roles of government.
Furthermore
, each
road
assigned for different motorist's and whoever violates the order should pay
fine
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.
For example
, a particular lane is allocated for
government owned
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buses(BRT) in Lagos state and no private car owner dares to navigate on
this
road
. In conclusion,
private owned
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vehicles shouldn't be prohibited
on
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city
centre's
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centres
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. Meanwhile,
traffic
light
can be placed to control
traffic
and each
road
should be labelled.
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