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Countries should produce the food that their population eats and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons, examples to you answers

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It is considered by many
people
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 that nations should produce enough
food
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 to fulfil the demand of their citizens without depending on others, so that the probability of
food
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 crisis should be eliminated from the nations,
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 it can cause the dangerous consequence of
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 insecurity. I agree with the statement. From my perspective, it should be a priority of every
nation
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 because it elevates the
food
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 security and employment rate in the country.
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 with, producing crops in bulk will be beneficial for the nations to save some
food
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 which can be utilized during disasters
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 as
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 crisis earthquake, and tsunami.
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 will help the
nation
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 to feed, its
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 while in crisis. Because scarcity of
food
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 can lead to many social problems within the
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 rise in the crime rate.
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, the Times of India reported in a recent survey that Mexico is a self-sufficient country during the
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 world, till now serve its
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 and become one of the happiest countries.
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, the agricultural sector impacts positively the country economy. The primary reason of
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 when
nation
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 produces their
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, it increases the demand for labour which provides the opportunity for jobs and eradicate poverty.
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, crops are produced naturally without using fertilizer, pesticide which prevents
people
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 from cancer and arthritis. For instances, India is one of the countries whose half of the population is dependent on farming, with a good immune system and a major exporter of wheat worldwide. In conclusion,
food
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 security is an absolute necessity currently.
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, I believe the
nation
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 should raise the capacity of
food
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 production and make its economy more stable.

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