6.Your friend is going to stay in your apartment while you are away. Write a letter to your friend and include: Where the key is Instructions to look after the apartment What should he/ she do on the day of your return

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Dear Amy, I hope you are well. I am writing

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letter to inform you of several things you’ll need to know. I will give the key to Grace, who is my lovely

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. As I have told her you are coming in ten days, she will be waiting for you on 15th June whilst giving you my apartment’s key. There are two reminders I want to give you.

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, one of the lights in the living room was broken down, and I haven’t had enough time to fix it, so you just use other lights.

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, every time after using the air conditioning, it would be better to check whether you have switched it off or not as the remoter doesn’t work sometimes.

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but not least, I’ll come back from my hometown before you leave. Because I am not entirely sure whether my flight will be on time or not, you don’t need to wait for me at home. I carry another key with me, which provides convenience and ease for both of us. I hope you have a wonderful holiday in Melbourne and I am looking forward to meeting you in one month. Best wishes, Nina

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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