Last week, you visited a local supermarket and you got satisfactory service. Write a letter to the supermarket manager to thank. In your letter: - introduce yourself; - say why you are satisfied; - say thank you and write about your future visits.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my gratitude for the exceptional
service
in your supermarket
as well as
explaining why I am happy with your
service
. I am Nozigul Bozorova a frequent visitor to your shopping center.
Last
week I went to the supermarket with my besties and I was very satisfied
how
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with how
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your assistants treated me
along with
their
service
. From that moment I
started
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concentrate my attention
to
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on
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other people who
were
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wanted to buy something in
this
place. The customers were so excited with
attractive
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service
. After
that
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I understood that your workers were so helpful and they had a pleasant shopping experience .
Also
, the cleanliness and
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organization of the store were incredible. I would like to extend my sincere thanks to you and your team for
high
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standard of customer
service
. I want you to be sure that I will continue choosing your supermarket . Because
this
store has an excellent
service
and quality products. Once again, thank you for your outstanding
service
. Please let your team know about my appreciation. And I believe that you will keep
such
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service
forever.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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faithfully, Nozigul Bozorova
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