Last week, you visited a local supermarket and you got satisfactory service. Write a letter to the supermarket manager to thank. In your letter: - introduce yourself; - say why you are satisfied; - say thank you and write about your future visits.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my gratitude for the exceptional service
in your supermarket as well as
explaining why I am happy with your service
.
I am Nozigul Bozorova a frequent visitor to your shopping center. Last
week I went to the supermarket with my besties and I was very satisfied how
your assistants treated me Change preposition
with how
along with
their service
.
From that moment I started
concentrate my attention Add the particle
started to
to
other people who Change preposition
on
were
wanted to buy something in Unnecessary verb
apply
this
place. The customers were so excited with attractive
Correct article usage
the attractive
service
. After that
I understood that your workers were so helpful and they had a pleasant shopping experience . Add a comma
that,
Also
, the cleanliness and best
organization of the store were incredible.
I would like to extend my sincere thanks to you and your team for Correct word choice
apply
high
standard of customer Correct pronoun usage
your high
service
. I want you to be sure that I will continue choosing your supermarket . Because this
store has an excellent service
and quality products.
Once again, thank you for your outstanding service
. Please let your team know about my appreciation. And I believe that you will keep such
high - quality
Correct your spelling
high-quality
service
forever.
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
Nozigul BozorovaCorrect your spelling
Yours
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