People believed that being literate in English allows you to acquire better jobs and thus allows one to have access to a better standard of living. Up to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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medium will give you secure jobs, and that allows people to live in higher standards.Here will explain there in details. In support of view many multinationals companies primary language is
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your chances of getting satisfactory jobs will
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.And according to my experience working in local companies and working in multinational companies will give you more advantages in other sectors
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buy expensive cars, branded clothes, home decor and
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medium will increase your chances for
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • literate in English
  • global job opportunities
  • multinational companies
  • working language
  • educational opportunities
  • higher qualifications
  • job prospects
  • industries
  • technology, finance, healthcare
  • key skill
  • higher-paying jobs
  • proficiency
  • standard of living
  • facilitate immigration
  • remote working opportunities
  • income stability
  • non-English-speaking countries
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