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In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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In
this
 day and age, private organizations are spending on and conducting more scientific
research
 as compared to the government sector. In my opinion, I agree that processes are more streamlined and efficient in private
companies
 and they are always challenging themselves with
latest
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research
-based projects,
although
 there are some minor disadvantages.
Firstly
, one of the major advantages of private
companies
 paying
and
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 conducting most scientific
research
 is that the resulting products are available in
market
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 quicker as they follow strict timelines and targets.
This
 is partly
due to
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 culture
with in
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 the organization and employee incentives based on their performances.
Secondly
, private
companies
 are always challenging themselves by competing in international markets to secure upcoming projects.
For instance
, in
previous
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 year, most of the
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COVID-19 vaccine
research
 grants were awarded to private
companies
 based on their
research
 capabilities and production efficiency. All these extra
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 by private organizations
also
 results in higher quality
research
 or
product
. Admittedly there are some minuscule problems related to private
companies
 spending and conducting most of scientific
research
. One potential problem is
product
 pricing which does not include any subsidies and would be more expansive as compared to a
product
 administered by
government
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 entity. Most advanced
research
 equipment and resources at private
organization
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organizations
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 would increase the price of
resulting
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product
 and would not be accessible to
general
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 public. Another problem can be of accessibility. As the cost of
such
research
 is higher, it would not be easily available. Different outlets will only exhibit
such
 products based on their audience which will result in
product
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products
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 being available at select locations or retailers. In conclusion,
research
 at private organizations having higher costs and selective distribution is not much of an issue as compared to the benefits it offers
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • groundbreaking technologies
  • efficiently allocate resources
  • innovative projects
  • strict timelines
  • profit motives
  • basic research
  • commercial application
  • corporate funding
  • biases in research
  • unbiased exploration
  • balanced exploration
  • public sector
  • private sector
  • synergy
  • comprehensive outcomes
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