Today, more and more parents depend on their children’s grandparents for childcare. Do you think this is a positive or negative trend?

In
this
era, both father and mother have to work in order to support their family expenditures.
Although
some individuals attach that to leave
children
with their
grandparents
has only negative effects, I totally believe that it provides both negative and positive trend. In
this
essay, I will examine my views. The principal reason many
people
have a negative attitude towards
children
who grow up with their
grandparents
is that they would lose their relationship with their father and mother.
Furthermore
,
children
possibly have bad behaviours if they live with the elderly.
For example
, there are a plethora of cases that teenagers seem to be offensive to other
people
because they have been raised by their
grandparents
and those elder
people
always spoiled their grandchild.
Besides
, those
children
possibly do an aggressive action to their parents too.
However
, the main reason that supports my good view about youngsters who raised by older relatives is that they can learn old tradition from their
grandparents
. It can be seen that in the globalization era, teenagers almost forget about old cultures. Staying with the elderly
people
are teaching them to learn about ancient life.
For instance
, in Thailand, most of the elders are living in the countryside. It means if the grandchild stays with their older parents, they can learn how to live without convenience facilities.
Moreover
, those
children
will
also
get a positive relationship with their relatives. In conclusion, even though teenagers might have terrible behaviour if they did not stay with their parents but in my point
of
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view, it
also
gives a good effect on the relationship between relatives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Reliance
  • Childcare costs
  • Intergenerational solidarity
  • Socioeconomic
  • Affordable childcare
  • Elders’ wisdom
  • Well-being
  • Life plans
  • Sense of purpose
  • Physical strain
  • Structured learning
  • Flexible child-minding
  • Family bonds
  • Obligated
  • Overburdened
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