Today, more and more parents depend on their children’s grandparents for childcare. Do you think this is a positive or negative trend?

In

this

era, both father and mother have to work in order to support their family expenditures.

Although

some individuals attach that to leave

children

with their

grandparents

has only negative effects, I totally believe that it provides both negative and positive trend. In

this

essay, I will examine my views. The principal reason many

people

have a negative attitude towards

children

who grow up with their

grandparents

is that they would lose their relationship with their father and mother.

Furthermore

,

children

possibly have bad behaviours if they live with the elderly.

For example

, there are a plethora of cases that teenagers seem to be offensive to other

people

because they have been raised by their

grandparents

and those elder

people

always spoiled their grandchild.

Besides

, those

children

possibly do an aggressive action to their parents too.

However

, the main reason that supports my good view about youngsters who raised by older relatives is that they can learn old tradition from their

grandparents

. It can be seen that in the globalization era, teenagers almost forget about old cultures. Staying with the elderly

people

are teaching them to learn about ancient life.

For instance

, in Thailand, most of the elders are living in the countryside. It means if the grandchild stays with their older parents, they can learn how to live without convenience facilities.

Moreover

, those

children

will

also

get a positive relationship with their relatives. In conclusion, even though teenagers might have terrible behaviour if they did not stay with their parents but in my point

of

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view, it

also

gives a good effect on the relationship between relatives.