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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is thought by some professionals that it is important for children to learn a
second
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language
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 at primary
school
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 rather than secondary
school
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.
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 learning another
language
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 at primary
school
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 has some drawbacks, the essay argues that the advantages do outweigh the disadvantages. One of the drawbacks of teaching a new
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 in
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first
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the first
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years
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 of
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 is that it will be hard for pupils to learn it, and it will take more time that can be used to focus on studying their native
language
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 at
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 age.
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, in my country, which speaks Arabic, we see that
students
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 who study in International Schools can speak both Arabic and English, but it is notable that their Arabic
language
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 is not as strong as other regular
students
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’ native
language
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.
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, learning
new
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language
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 has many benefits, one of the important benefits is that it increases the fluency of that
language
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 for
students
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 at the time of graduation as they start to learn from
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the early
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years
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 of
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,
students
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 who learnt English in
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their early
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years
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 received acceptance in foreign universities with less effort spent in doing English tests than others who did not.
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, learning another
language
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 helps kids learn the culture of foreign countries and makes it easy to communicate with other
students
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 of these countries, which helps them socialize and become more mature. To conclude, teaching
new
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language
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 to pupils in
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first
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the first
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years
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 of
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 has some disadvantages, but it
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 has many important advantages, and the advantages do outweigh the disadvantages.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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