Some people think that going to a fitness centre regularly is unnecessary. Instead, they believe that combining occasional exercise (such as going for walks) with a balanced diet is enough to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern society, most
people
in the world lack regular exercise
to stay fit. As a consequence
, it is not surprising that some experts regard going to the fitness centre regularly as the best way to maintain a healthy life. However
, others consider that light exercise
such
as jogging, along with
a balanced diet
is the only way to stay healthy. Personally
I support the former view. Add a comma
Personally,
Firstly
, regularly
Change the word
regular
exercise
, at the gym
, helps to prevent diseases and enhances body shape. Fitness workouts make an individual look healthier, fitter
and allow them to form Correct word choice
and fitter
the
muscular shape. The fitness centre can Correct article usage
a
also
focus on an individual’s exercise
routinely
. In a Change the word
routine
gym
, a person can practising
on equipment that focuses workout on particular parts of the body. Professional trainers are Change the verb form
practise
be practising
also
at the gym
and can offer advice and assistance. Also
, being with like- minded
Correct your spelling
like-minded
people
can provide a good environment for exercise
. That is
not to say that doing regular light exercise
cannot also
be healthy, and should be encouraged. Walking can burn the
calories, Correct article usage
apply
although
not the same levels of fat that
is
possible with frequent trips to the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
gym
. Many people
are busy and may not have time to go to the gym
, but having a walk is easy to plan. Eating an appropriate diet
also
assists health. A balanced diet
, suited to an individuals’
requirements, has benefits. It helps to prevent disease, improves the body functions and increases energy levels Change noun form
individual’s
overall
. However
, without regular strenuous ,exercising it may not be enough. To conclude
, in my view
regular Add a comma
view,
exercise
at a gym
can offer more advantages than just doing light activities, such
as jogging, when mixed with a good diet
. People
have a focused environment to exercise
, access to various health
snacks / drinks and can gain assistance from employees at the Replace the word
healthy
gym
. In addition
, the culture of a gym
encourages people
to develop a healthier lifestyle.Submitted by kev4313 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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