Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school, while others received too much pressure from there over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think parents put too much pressure on the children to perform well at school? What do you think the role of a parent should be in their child’s education?

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not show any interest in their

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educational progress at

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, there are others who are over caring

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the extinct that could reflect badly on their

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puts high stress on their youngsters because probably they have had

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experience back when they were students.

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in the education of their

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must be a supervisory and supportive

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that completes the

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of the

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which is to teach and educate. As it is known, fathers and mothers always want the best for their

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, and they do their best to fulfil their needs, especially for the things that they could not get or fulfil when they were younger.

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, they will push hard on their kids to drive them to do their best, especially in their studies, so that they can guarantee a good higher education and

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a good career that pays well and satisfies their needs.

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, one of my classmates who was lazy at

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and did not make it to the university,

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struggled to find a job that pays his rent and family expenses, so he pushes his

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to focus and do their best at class so that they do not face the problems he is facing now. To be honest, I think the

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of

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in pupil’s education is vital and it is to complete the

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of teachers. Teachers

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in class and

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follow up at home.

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must be monitoring their

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behaviour inside and outside

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. Not only that, but they must make sure that they are doing their homework on time and help them finishing them if needed. To conclude, there are

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who stress their kids to highly perform in their studies to have

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future, while there are others who are careless.

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in the educational progress of the students is vital and completes the

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of the teachers.