It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern and competitive society acquisition of
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knowledge is very crucial to gain success in
life
. Some people tend to stay with their families while they study in universities to receive
comfort
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of family.
In contrast
, some
students
like to study in universities or colleges that are far away from their
home
for social and personal purposes.
This
essay will discuss both aspects before making any definitive conclusion. There are indeed numerous benefits and advantages of studying in
home
town universities.
Student
can enjoy
home
comfort and
support
from their families in daily household chores
such
as preparing meals, sanitation and other aspects.
Student
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A student
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who
are
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living with
the
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parents
have
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tremendous
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amount of
support
in order to succeed in university.
For instance
,
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first year
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university
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is
very
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crucial period in term of
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adjusting
in
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university
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atmosphere, during
this
period
students
require
help
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and
support
of their elders.
Furthermore
, presence of the family members and old friends allow us to get proper guidance, healthy food and emotional
support
.
In addition
, some
students
are overprotective when they go far away from their
home
; they feel very isolated and depressed.
Thus
, it can be seen that
this
trend has some positive impacts on
individual
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an individual
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as well as on our society.
On the other hand
, there are enormous benefits of studying outside.
First
of all,
student
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the student
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will gain confidence and they will become more responsible.
For example
, one learns to deal with domestic daily chores like making food, cleaning and paying rent and bills.
Secondly
,
student
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the student
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learns how to tackle
different
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kind of people and learns how to make their own decisions in
difficult
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a difficult
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time.
Thus
they develop various types of qualities and skills to make their own
life
happier and enjoyable.
Last
but not least, independence of living away from
home
is a benefit because it helps the
students
develop social skills and improve as a person.
As a result
, their maturity and confidence will grow
enabling
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them to live a successful
life
. In conclusion, in my perspective both aspects have advantages and disadvantages, one should make their own choice because every person is different. Some people like to live in freedom while
other
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believe that family
support
is very important in
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life
.
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