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It is important that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education which brings children possessing different talents and skills from various social
classes
 together plays a significant role in their development. I completely support the viewpoint as it will foster empathy, understanding and remove class among
students
.
First
 of all, education is the fundamental right of all
inspite
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in spite
 of the social class one belongs to. So,
talent
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 and skill of the individual should be the deciding factor while imparting education among the pupils. When kids from diverse social backgrounds study together, often they develop a sense of empathy and understanding toward the other class.
Thus
, they start acquiring social and behavioural skills at an early stage of their life.
Secondly
, educating
students
 from the initial stage to live peacefully with each other brings about a positive social change.
Furthermore
, it would minimize the chances of
lower
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 section of the society being exploited by the upper section.
This
 way of educating
students
 can definitely play a fundamental role in the establishment of an ideal society.
For example
, many government schools in Canada experience intake of
students
 from various social backgrounds;
therefore
,
students
 are encouraged to be regardful to other cultures and
classes
.
However
, problems occurring in mixing
wide
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 range of
classes
such
 as bullying, teasing and exploitation can not be ignored. But,
by
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framing proper anti-bullying policies for any kind of anti-social
behavior
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 can curb these problems. To summarise, bringing different
classes
 and skills together while studying has many benefits and the problems caused due to
this
 blend can be solved with proper policies framed by schools.
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