IMPROVEMENTS IN HEALTH, EDUCATION AND TRADE ARE ESSENTIAL FOR THE DEVELOPMENT OF POORER NATIONS. HOWEVER,THE GOVERNMENTS OF RICHER NATIONS SHOULD TAKE MORE RESPONSIBILITY FOR HELPING THE POORER NATIONS IN SUCH AREAS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

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It is true that in modern society some developing

countries

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are struggling to improve the basic rights of the citizens

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as healthcare, education, and etc. The assistance of developed

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in improving live conditions would dramatically help societies in many ways. In

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essay, I will discuss why richer

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should support the development of poorer

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. In the century of globalization, the well-being of one nation can have an impact on the world's economical situation.

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, rich

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should help poorer

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they can benefit themselves.

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, rich

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should focus on improving conditions in schools and hospitals of poor

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. They can allocate funds to build schools and hospitals, these measures would make basic needs accessible.

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, schools and hospitals in developing

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are in very bad condition.

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, governments of richer

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can help to improve the education system of poor

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. Developed

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generally have good education and health care systems with experienced specialists. They can send expert teachers and doctors to provide training. Alternatively, every government's governments responsibility is to take care of its own citizens.

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, without any external assistance, it may be very difficult for governments to improve living conditions within a short time.

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countries

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can get loans. To sum up, I believe that all human beings should help each other.

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, allocated funds to provide help may have not significant drawbacks for the economy of a developed country while it helps to dramatically improve lives in another country.

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Topic Vocabulary:

underdeveloped nations
economic disparity
global cooperation
moral obligation
historical exploitation
interconnected world
economic stability
quality of life
trade relationships
humanitarian aid
capacity building
dependency syndrome
sustainable development
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IMPROVEMENTS IN HEALTH, EDUCATION AND TRADE ARE ESSENTIAL FOR THE DEVELOPMENT OF POORER NATIONS. HOWEVER,THE GOVERNMENTS OF RICHER NATIONS SHOULD TAKE MORE RESPONSIBILITY FOR HELPING THE POORER NATIONS IN SUCH AREAS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

A test for cycling should be mandatory. Do you agree or disagree?

Some modern artist receive huge sums of money for the things they create while others struggle to survive Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation To what extent do you agree or disagree

Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people?

You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: •explain which course you are interested in •say what you know about the university • explain why you should receive the scholarship