One good way to promote world peace is through international sporting events. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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events

world-widely. There are some experts

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that

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initiative seems to minimise the animosity between enemy nations. I disagree with the

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view point

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for a certain extent even though these friendly matches bring residents close together,

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happens mostly in an ideal world .

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essay will support my views in the following paragraphs Bringing two countries’ citizens in

a

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one frame is the primary benefit of big sports

events

. When a multi-national program conducts, various countries participate in it, including both sisters and enemies.

However

, during the event,

sport

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personals get an opportunity to not only interact and understand each other, but it is a time to realise that how

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common they are. Eventually,

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could minimise their differences and feel more

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one

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in one

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another company. To illustrate

this

, before a century ago, Europeans had fought each other;

nevertheless

, the Olympics made them a single unit and now they

are belongs

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to

European

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the European

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union with

same

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currency, no border and so on. Despite having some advantages,

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may not be the case all the time. By conducting

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events

, hardly, do what it intended to do.

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means when two countries encounter at a field, supporters cheer them up, should slogans, due to

this

, opponents may be upset,

moreover

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this

can ignite

further

conflicts.

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, whenever India and Pakistan play a match, the atmosphere would be heated and people remained in separate groups, mostly, tend to lead a riot.

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, if they had a thoughtful dialogue

in

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a diplomatic level, it would have been settled their differences

amiably

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amicably

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.

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sports

events

,

therefore

, rarely consider as a friendly encounter to resolve problems between countries. In conclusion, after

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into the view, I firmly believe that even though mega sporting can stand participants under a roof, never resolve an actual issue, so I disapprove

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argument. It is vitally important to find

peace

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a peace

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agreement to make

world

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the world

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is a better place to live.