Scientific innovation is always a positive thing and should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.
With the development of human society, scientists have
innnovated
various technologies that boosted Correct your spelling
innovated
whole
society's Correct article usage
the whole
efficency
a lot in past decades. We could not imagine how we lived in the past without all the technology products that benefit us now. I believe that Correct your spelling
efficiency
efficiently
evolution
of science should always be supported in our world.
To prove my perspective, I would take electronic payments as an example. About a decade ago, Chinese people were mainly using cash as their media of payments. If you visit China today, you would surprisingly find cash is rarely seen in China, Correct article usage
the evolution
instead
, people are using apps
to pay for goods and services. This
is due to the development of electronic paying apps
such
as Alipay and Wechat
Pay, these two Correct your spelling
WeChat
apps
are two
most dominating paying Correct article usage
the two
apps
in China today. One key factor is supports from Chinese
government, it provides Add an article
the Chinese
enomrous
funds for mobile software developers to build an electronic payment system for citizens. By paying electronically, people do not need to carry cash in their pockets and it encourages the Correct your spelling
enormous
amount
of transactions in Change the quantifier
number
economy
which would easily Add an article
the economy
an economy
benefits
the GDP.
To take on the other side, if the velocity of innovation is too high, it could cause some moral issues. Clone as a technology has been Change the verb form
benefit
controvercial
for a long period of time. All the countries in the world are still banning clone for non-research purposesCorrect your spelling
controversial
,
because it would create moral Remove the comma
apply
harzards
for human society. I've heard there was a Japanese biology company was planning to help a husband clone his wife who was dead Correct your spelling
hazards
hazard
long
time ago, and Correct article usage
a long
then
Scientific
Department of Japan immediately shut down the company and banned those researchers for Correct article usage
the Scientific
further
studies. Everyone on this
planet is an independ
human being, if there was another copy of him, others would not treat them Correct your spelling
independent
as
the same way since they Change preposition
apply
looks
identically Change the verb form
look
same
but have different souls.
In a nutshell, developments Correct article usage
the same
of
science would offer us more varieties and enhance our productivity as long as we use them with our precautions and wisdom.Change preposition
in
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
