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Describe how instant noodles are manufactured. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write 150 words

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The given graphic image illustrates the production and manufacturing of ready-to-eat noodles. Overall, the process starts with moving flour to the mixer, where it is processed into a dough, which
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 passes through six steps, resulting in the final product - cup noodles. It all starts with flour being trucked to the factory where it is stored in silos. The flour has to
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 be transported to the mixer. Here they are mixed with water and oil to form a dough, which
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 passes through rollers to form dough sheets. These are
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 cut into strips which are in turn made into noodle discs. The discs are cooked in oil and dried before being packed into cups. After being placed in the cups the discs are seasoned with vegetables and spices.
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 the
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 stage of labelling and sealing takes place before they are rolled out of the assembly line, ready to be shipped. Bon appetit!
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