Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal, some.people , however ,think that other tips of progress are equally important for country . Discuss both of the view and give your opinion ?

Many governments believe that solving economic issues in
countries
is the most essential target .
In contrast
, sometimes it is thought by people that the other progress
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necessary as well as economic .In my idea , there is not
any
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difference between the effectiveness of economic and other goals. In the following essay , both of the views will be discussed . Observing and being many needs on people life and
countries
which can not be solved or improved by economic improvement would be the strong cause of the public do not accept the economic improvement by the government is whenever and wherever .
Furthermore
, some issues in some
countries
have occurred that needs specialised development.
For example
, some
politics
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argument between communities
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seen that need presidents improved their communication politics
such
as happening warms between Israel and Palestine .
On the other hand
, the power full reason for knowing financial development as the main gold for the governments would be the fact that many problems in societies have root in
the
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financial matters and poverty .
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,
government
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a government
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think that the more they improve the economic situation in the
publics
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life , the better
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and

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an
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and

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more tranquillity people will be able to have so a
calmness
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country can be made.
For instance
, if there is not observed economic progress , the public can not provide their needs
such
as feeding , children's school's fees and rent or buy
house
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a house
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.
Therefore
, providing a proper condition in
countries
obeys from improvement in financial condition by the government. In conclusion , in my opinion , despite the fact that some situation and matters in
countries
would be solved by the perfect economic progress , there are some others targets in societies that have been never developed by financial development.

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