You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have an acquaintance that lives there. Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter • explain your situation • say why you feel unsure about living in the city • ask some questions about life in the cit

Dear Karan, I am writing
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letter to ask a
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of explaining to me a bit about your city. As a matter of fact, I got a job offer letter from Seasia Infotech one of the best IT companies in Sarnia, Ontario. It offered me a remote job but I have to be in the office during the training period. I am worried about my accommodation because Sarnia is very new to me. I have never been there before. I request you to please help me by providing me with details regarding the paid accommodation types
along with
the price range.
Besides
that, I will choose to commute by public transport and please let me know which is best suitable for me. I have heard that most of the commercial food store in the city has non-vegetarian food products. I want you to tell me about the location of the Indian store if there is any or the vegetarian food court. I am waiting for your response. Yours sincerely, Navdeep Kaur
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Task Achievement
Ensure that the purpose of your letter is clear, with pertinent details supporting your requests.
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Consider adding more detail about your uncertainties to better explain your situation.
Coherence & Cohesion
Improve transitions between paragraphs to enhance readability.
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Make sure that your requests are appropriately detailed to help your acquaintance understand exactly what type of information you need.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use a varied range of cohesive devices to link your ideas more effectively.
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