You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have an acquaintance that lives there. Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter • explain your situation • say why you feel unsure about living in the city • ask some questions about life in the cit

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of explaining to me a bit about your city. As a matter of fact, I got a job offer letter from Seasia Infotech one of the best IT companies in Sarnia, Ontario. It offered me a remote job but I have to be in the office during the training period. I am worried about my accommodation because Sarnia is very new to me. I have never been there before. I request you to please help me by providing me with details regarding the paid accommodation types

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that, I will choose to commute by public transport and please let me know which is best suitable for me. I have heard that most of the commercial food store in the city has non-vegetarian food products. I want you to tell me about the location of the Indian store if there is any or the vegetarian food court. I am waiting for your response. Yours sincerely, Navdeep Kaur

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Ensure that the purpose of your letter is clear, with pertinent details supporting your requests.

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Consider adding more detail about your uncertainties to better explain your situation.

Coherence & Cohesion

Improve transitions between paragraphs to enhance readability.

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Make sure that your requests are appropriately detailed to help your acquaintance understand exactly what type of information you need.

Coherence & Cohesion

Use a varied range of cohesive devices to link your ideas more effectively.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

172 words

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