The world today is a safer place and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Although
the world these days is a safer place than in the older decade, we can't
ignore the possibility of war that can happen whenever. Meanwhile, some people believe that governments should stop spending large amounts of money on the expenditure of armed forces. Hence
, I partly side with the community who agree that there must be a big amount of allocation for the arrangement if there is a battle. This
will be proven by discussing how the preparation of armed forces can prevent a country
from vulnerability.
First and foremost, the conflict can't
be predicted when to come yet some people are still on the side of them who agree that the government of a provincial shouldn't
spend millions on their military. This
can affect the country
's vulnerability which can be harmful if there is bloodshed. Looking at historical examples where disarmament led to vulnerability, for example
, when in WWII situations, could serve as a cautionary perspective. Therefore
, a bundle of budget for the army should be there to prevent the bad impacts when there is a combat.
On the other hand
, although
defence equipment is important to a country
, we also
can't
ignore the other sectors' budgets. If the budget couldn't
be reallocated to sectors like education, healthcare, or environmental conservation, there would be inequality between each district. For instance
, if the education zone only has a low cost, it can affect the quality of the education and the wages for the teachers. Consequently
, the study for each region can be not the same and decreases the quality of the people in a province. Thus
, the financial implications of defence equipment spending should be dissected.
To summarize, big bucks are needed for soldierly to prevent the sense of being defenceless so civilians can feel secure. On the backward, a million cost is also
needed in another part which is also
important to a country
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