Write about an important location in your country.

A wonderful and pleasant
city
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called
Taunggyi
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has amazing views attracting tourists to have a
visit
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. Even it is very populated, the
city
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is garbage-free and possesses a beautiful culture. Many historical pagodas are worth visiting and can enjoy the skyline of
Taunggyi
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from there. The climate is
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cool and pleasant.
Taunggyi
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, the capital of
Shan
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State, is famous for the wealthiness of the
people
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, historical sites and excellent shopping facilities.
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, most of the
people
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in
Taunggyi
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are Chinese and extremely rich due to their businesses, like textile, gold and jewellery commerce.
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, you can see many clothes shops and jewellery shops in the downtown area. The clothes are mostly from Thailand so it is worth buying. But, there is a rumour that the
people
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in
Taunggyi
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are wealthy especially by smuggling drugs.
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, there are many historical sites around the
city
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.
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, Sulamani Pagoda, Shwe Phone Pwint pagoda and Mya Sein Taung Pagoda are well-known pagodas around
Taunggyi
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. From these famous historic sites, you can wonderfully enjoy the
city
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skyline.
Shan
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people
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take sabbath at the monasteries on every full moon day and is
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a beautiful culture which you can only see in
Shan
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State.
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, you will be satisfied if you go shopping in the markets of
Taunggyi
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. Various shops selling textile are greatly attractive to the visitors. Shopping in
Taunggyi
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makes you
visit
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there again.
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, shopping or window shopping must be done during your
visit
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.
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, it is very expensive shopping. In conclusion,
Taunggyi
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is the biggest and wealthiest in
Shan
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State which is worth visiting during your vacation with your family or friends according to the reasons that I mentioned above. All in all, I strongly recommend you
Taunggyi
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as an important location to
visit
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.

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