Write about an important location in your country.

A wonderful and pleasant
city
called
Taunggyi
has amazing views attracting tourists to have a
visit
. Even it is very populated, the
city
is garbage-free and possesses a beautiful culture. Many historical pagodas are worth visiting and can enjoy the skyline of
Taunggyi
from there. The climate is
also
cool and pleasant.
Taunggyi
, the capital of
Shan
State, is famous for the wealthiness of the
people
, historical sites and excellent shopping facilities.
Firstly
, most of the
people
in
Taunggyi
are Chinese and extremely rich due to their businesses, like textile, gold and jewellery commerce.
For instance
, you can see many clothes shops and jewellery shops in the downtown area. The clothes are mostly from Thailand so it is worth buying. But, there is a rumour that the
people
in
Taunggyi
are wealthy especially by smuggling drugs.
Secondly
, there are many historical sites around the
city
.
For example
, Sulamani Pagoda, Shwe Phone Pwint pagoda and Mya Sein Taung Pagoda are well-known pagodas around
Taunggyi
. From these famous historic sites, you can wonderfully enjoy the
city
skyline.
Shan
people
take sabbath at the monasteries on every full moon day and is
such
a beautiful culture which you can only see in
Shan
State.
Lastly
, you will be satisfied if you go shopping in the markets of
Taunggyi
. Various shops selling textile are greatly attractive to the visitors. Shopping in
Taunggyi
makes you
visit
there again.
Therefore
, shopping or window shopping must be done during your
visit
.
On the other hand
, it is very expensive shopping. In conclusion,
Taunggyi
is the biggest and wealthiest in
Shan
State which is worth visiting during your vacation with your family or friends according to the reasons that I mentioned above. All in all, I strongly recommend you
Taunggyi
as an important location to
visit
.

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