Write about an important location in your country.

A wonderful and pleasant

city

called

Taunggyi

has amazing views attracting tourists to have a

visit

. Even it is very populated, the

city

is garbage-free and possesses a beautiful culture. Many historical pagodas are worth visiting and can enjoy the skyline of

Taunggyi

from there. The climate is

also

cool and pleasant.

Taunggyi

, the capital of

Shan

State, is famous for the wealthiness of the

people

, historical sites and excellent shopping facilities.

Firstly

, most of the

people

Taunggyi

are Chinese and extremely rich due to their businesses, like textile, gold and jewellery commerce.

For instance

, you can see many clothes shops and jewellery shops in the downtown area. The clothes are mostly from Thailand so it is worth buying. But, there is a rumour that the

people

Taunggyi

are wealthy especially by smuggling drugs.

Secondly

, there are many historical sites around the

city

For example

, Sulamani Pagoda, Shwe Phone Pwint pagoda and Mya Sein Taung Pagoda are well-known pagodas around

Taunggyi

. From these famous historic sites, you can wonderfully enjoy the

city

skyline.

Shan

people

take sabbath at the monasteries on every full moon day and is

such

a beautiful culture which you can only see in

Shan

State.

Lastly

, you will be satisfied if you go shopping in the markets of

Taunggyi

. Various shops selling textile are greatly attractive to the visitors. Shopping in

Taunggyi

makes you

visit

there again.

Therefore

, shopping or window shopping must be done during your

visit

On the other hand

, it is very expensive shopping. In conclusion,

Taunggyi

is the biggest and wealthiest in

Shan

State which is worth visiting during your vacation with your family or friends according to the reasons that I mentioned above. All in all, I strongly recommend you

Taunggyi

as an important location to

visit

Fri Jun 11 2021

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