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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, the disruptive discipline of
children
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 has become a commonly discussed issue. While some people believe that
teachers
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 are responsible for fostering the ethical behaviour of
children
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, many others assert that
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 responsibility belongs to
parents
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. In
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 essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support of the latter view. It is true, that
children
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 spend more than half of their days at school.
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,
teachers
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 should pay certain attention to the discipline of their students. Even so, generally, classes have too many students, for a teacher to be able to handle them all.
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, I was studying together with 39 more
children
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 in one class;
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, when we misbehaved our teacher had to spend half of the lesson trying to calm us down. Clearly,
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 is not something
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 expected from schools. In my opinion,
teachers
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 should focus on the lessons rather than disruptive behaviours. Alternatively,
children
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 tend to learn everything from their
parents
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 and imitate them. For
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 reason,
parents
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 should focus on ethically fostering their little ones.
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,
children
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 go to school at the age of 8; by that time,
children
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 already have certain habits. More specifically,
parents
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 start fostering their child from an early age
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, they have to teach what is right and what is wrong.
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, my mother was reading fairy tales to illustrate bad and good behaviours. To sum up,
teachers
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 and
parents
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 are responsible for the discipline of the younger ones at some point.
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, I believe that
parents
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 should take more responsibility in fostering their
children
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 because
children
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 are small imitations of the
parents
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.
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