Some people think single sex education is beneficial for children's development.Do you agree or disagree this statement and why?

As education is crucial
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21st
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century, many parents are confused about whether to send their children to
mixed
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gender
school
or
single
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school
. I believe teaching them in
single
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gender
school
is more profitable for their future. On the one hand, some people believe that
seperating
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separating

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both
sex
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sexes

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would have some drawbacks when
students
are taught.
School
is
first
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footstep
about
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social interaction. If they talk with
only
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the only

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same-sex

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same
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sex
, both of them could not understand each other and even have prejudices and stereotype due to
absence
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of communication.
In addition
, they who went to the one
gender
school
would suffer from hazards in making amicable social relationship in
workplace
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or
universary
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university

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. In fact, some people who entered a work coexisted both
gender
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genders

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are
iclined
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to close
single
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sex
one.
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, it would have
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of social ability.
On the other hand
, others argue strongly that educating
single
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single-sex

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sex
only would give
students
more benefits.At
first
, the most remarkable reason is
comfortable
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environment. They don’t need to be conscious about
opposite
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the opposite

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sex
. In fact, many
mixed
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gender
school
’s
students
suffer from low concentration of their study and
low
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score(grade). It’s mainly because most young age groups
such
as adolescents are fascinated
in
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sexuality. So, it
make
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them distracted and not focused on their
school
life. That’s why if they study with
same
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classmates, I assume they would concentrate on it and get many sakes. In conclusion,
although
single
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education has some faults to
students
, I personally believe teaching them by dividing with two groups would be effective in achieving
good
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outcome and have more merits.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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