Some people think single sex education is beneficial for children's development.Do you agree or disagree this statement and why?

As education is pivotal in the 21st century, many parents are confused about whether to send their children to mixed-gender
school
or
single gender
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school
. I believe teaching them in single-gender
school
is more profitable for their future. On the one hand, some people believe that separating both
sex
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sexes

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would have some drawbacks when
students
are taught.
To begin
with,
school
is the
first
footstep in social interaction. If they talk with the only
same
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same-sex

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sex
, both of them could not understand each other and even have prejudices and stereotype due to the absence of communication.
In addition
, they who went to the one-gender
school
would suffer from making amicable social relationship in
workplace
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the workplace

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or university. In fact, some people who entered a work coexisted both
gender
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genders

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are inclined to close the
single
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single-sex

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sex
one.
Thus
, it would have
lack
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a lack

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of
the
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apply

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social skills for them.
On the other hand
, others argue strongly that educating
single
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single-sex

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sex
only would give
students
more benefits. At
first
, the most remarkable reason is
comfortable
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the comfortable

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environment. They don’t need to be conscious about
opposite
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the opposite

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sex
. Actually, many mixed-gender
school
’s
students
undergo low concentration of their study and low grade. It’s mainly since most young age groups
such
as adolescents are fascinated
in
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by

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sexuality. So, it makes them distracted and not focused on their
school
life.
Hence
, if they only get on with the classmates
having
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of having

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same
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the same

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gender. I assume they would concentrate on academics and get many sakes. In conclusion,
although
single-
sex
education has some deficiency to
students
, I personally reckon teaching them by dividing with two groups would be effective in achieving
good
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a good

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outcome and have more merits.

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