Some people think single sex education is beneficial for children's development.Do you agree or disagree this statement and why?

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As education is pivotal in the 21st century, many parents are confused about whether to send their children to mixed-gender
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or
single gender
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school
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. I believe teaching them in single-gender
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is more profitable for their future. On the one hand, some people believe that separating both
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sex
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would have some drawbacks when
students
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are taught.
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with,
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is the
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footstep in social interaction. If they talk with the only
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sex
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, both of them could not understand each other and even have prejudices and stereotype due to the absence of communication.
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, they who went to the one-gender
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would suffer from making amicable social relationship in
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or university. In fact, some people who entered a work coexisted both
gender
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genders
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are inclined to close the
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sex
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one.
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, it would have
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of
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social skills for them.
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, others argue strongly that educating
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sex
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only would give
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more benefits. At
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, the most remarkable reason is
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environment. They don’t need to be conscious about
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the opposite
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sex
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. Actually, many mixed-gender
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’s
students
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undergo low concentration of their study and low grade. It’s mainly since most young age groups
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as adolescents are fascinated
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sexuality. So, it makes them distracted and not focused on their
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life.
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, if they only get on with the classmates
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same
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the same
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gender. I assume they would concentrate on academics and get many sakes. In conclusion,
although
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single-
sex
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education has some deficiency to
students
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, I personally reckon teaching them by dividing with two groups would be effective in achieving
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outcome and have more merits.
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