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Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is true that all
children
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 have different
abilities
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 and are unique. While some people argue that
students
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 at school should be divided into different groups based on their
abilities
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, many others believe that
children
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 with various intellectual
abilities
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 should study together. In
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 essay, I will address both sides of the argument and explain my support of the latter view. The division of
students
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 into classes based on their
abilities
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 may have a number of detrimental drawbacks.
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, streaming can bring about labelling. More specifically
children
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 at their young ages may start dividing and stigmatizing the
students
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 below their levels.
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,
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 with worse academic achievements will not have a chance to learn from more advanced ones.
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, while studying in school I always used to take an example from the
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 with excellent grades and believed that I could
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 study the same good.
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, there is likely less disruption and peer pressure at lessons, since all the
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 would be focused on classes tailored individually for their
abilities
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.
On the other hand
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, in mixed classes, all
students
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 have equal chances to work on their skills and improve their academic achievements. When all
students
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 learn together they may have a scent of competition which can have a conducive effect on their studies.
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,
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 will not be neglected by their parents for being "less intellectual". To sum up, I would concede that steaming may have some advantages for
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 with good academic achievements. Despite that, I believe that co-studying facilitates a more comprehensive learning environment equally for all the
students
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.
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