Many companies today sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that this is a good thing for the world of sport. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In the modern era, as
sports
are very popular among people
of all ages, advertising companies
take advantage by promoting their products
through this
events. Indeed, Correct determiner usage
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companies
but also
sports
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through advertisement is good
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sports
stars and general people
to indulge in it.
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sponsor
sponsors
to
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sportsman
and improve infrastrucure
along with help Correct your spelling
infrastructure
companies
to promote their product on wider
scale. Of course to provide Add an article
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huge
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For example
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wants sponser
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sponsor
the
Indian women hockey nor wants to connect their name with them. Correct article usage
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In addition
to that sports
are food for the brain and large of people
watch sports
. So if companies
advertise their products
through sports
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the acceptance
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wrist band
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companies
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tabacoo
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products
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thinking
its
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news paper
number of Correct your spelling
newspaper
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sportsman
start
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products
. Along with this
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lots of Correct your spelling
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the ground
side bars
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some time make the watching experience verse, as Correct your spelling
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instead
of sports
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sportspeople
people
diverted to that advertisment
.
In conclusion, there is a Correct your spelling
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sponsering
commercials in Correct your spelling
sponsoring
sports
to nurture the sportsman
and promote the sports
globaly
and Correct your spelling
globally
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also
promot
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promote
commercal
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commercial
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