Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to
a
cultural difference. Some Correct article usage
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people
insist that a country in which a person was born has a huge impact on one's culture
, while others claim there is fewer
impact. In Correct quantifier usage
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this
essay, I am going to discuss both sides of the argument and examine the reason why I believe origin affects one's culture
.
To begin
with, there are several reasons why I believe nationalities are affect
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are affected
culture
. Firstly
, people
from different countries speak different languages. In fact, bilinguals tend to change their personalities depend of
the language that they use. Change the preposition
on
This
is because that
languages have Change the determiner
those
close
connection with Add an article
a close
culture
that it is developed. Add an article
a culture
the culture
For instance
, the language that Aborigine se
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she
dose
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does
not
have words meaning directions, and Change the verb form
does not
did not
hence
they put themselves at the centre of the world. In addition
to this
, education is also
different. Since people
learn the same historical event, such
as World War 2 from different perspectives, they tend to have different ways of thinkings.
On the other hand
, others insist that there are few impacts of nationalities for two reasons, Firstly
, thanks to globalization, people
living in
around the world are able to catch the same information. Change preposition
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For example
, children In Japan watch animations made by Studio Ghibli, as well as animations made by Disney,
and vice versa. Remove the comma
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Furthermore
, TV shows, musics
and books are Change the wording
music
kinds of music
pieces of music
also
imported. Thus
, people
are exposed to the same culture
, even if they live in different countries. On top of that
a religion has a large impact on one's Add a comma
,that
culture
. For example
, Muslims do fasting while specific
period which is called Ramadan.
To conclude, I believe both sides of the argument have merits. Correct article usage
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However
, I assume that people
are affected largely by a
country in which they were born. Correct article usage
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This
is because they speak different languages and recieve
different education.Correct your spelling
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