Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to
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cultural difference. Some
people
insist that a country in which a person was born has a huge impact on one's
culture
, while others claim there is
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impact. In
this
essay, I am going to discuss both sides of the argument and examine the reason why I believe origin affects one's
culture
.
To begin
with, there are several reasons why I believe nationalities
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culture
.
Firstly
,
people
from different countries speak different languages. In fact, bilinguals tend to change their personalities depend
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the language that they use.
This
is because
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languages have
close
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connection with
culture
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a culture
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that it is developed.
For instance
, the language that Aborigine
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not
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have words meaning directions, and
hence
they put themselves at the centre of the world.
In addition
to
this
, education is
also
different. Since
people
learn the same historical event,
such
as World War 2 from different perspectives, they tend to have different ways of thinkings.
On the other hand
, others insist that there are few impacts of nationalities for two reasons,
Firstly
, thanks to globalization,
people
living
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around the world are able to catch the same information.
For example
, children In Japan watch animations made by Studio Ghibli, as well as animations made by Disney
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and vice versa.
Furthermore
, TV shows,
musics
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music
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and books are
also
imported.
Thus
,
people
are exposed to the same
culture
, even if they live in different countries. On top of
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a religion has a large impact on one's
culture
.
For example
, Muslims do fasting while
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period which is called Ramadan. To conclude, I believe both sides of the argument have merits.
However
, I assume that
people
are affected largely by
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country in which they were born.
This
is because they speak different languages and
recieve
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receive
received
different education.
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